You know, I just re-read this, and it broke my heart all over again. This is still one of the most amazingly deep stories I've read on this site, and I hope that you are still writing. A lot of the people I used to read are no longer on here, it's been to long that I've been gone myself I guess :)
Author's Response: Heh, actually- I've been gone myself for over a year and a half. I've only just now come back to check- thought I might update. One of my readers on another site contacted me and may have just inspired me enough to re-enter the world of fanfiction.
i thought your story was brilliant! i loved the FOB lyrics that cotributed as a soundtrack of sorts and how the lyrics perfectly complimented the paragraph it followed its the best fanfiction ive read in ages and im such a sap i cried at the end !! but i loved it ! lol
i love it!!
this is going to my favorites...believe it!! =^.^= xx
yeah it was a bit long though...and a bit serious but i loved it...i wanted neji and shikamaru to get together
poor shikamaru....
lol well good luck with all your other fic's ^^
its a ten from mee :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! And I'm gunna need all the luck I can get with the rest of my fics... ugh... they're not coming along too well, unfortunately. Inspiration = GONE. T_T
tragic, sad, brilliant.
Author's Response: Thankyou.
Heh. I hated it...no, not really. It was terrific. So sad. Sad and hot, one of my fav combos. n.n
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it... I admit, you had my heart racing for a moment, there XDrnrn-Archaic
I hate it too when people favorite without reviewing, it's just so annoying.
Oh, right I'm supposed to talk about the story. Sorry. *looks sheepish*
It was... Amazing. Perfect. Sad. Inspiring. And delicious smut.
*is flipping through the Thesaurus* Ah! Here it i- *dog comes and eats Thesaurus*
~Tasi Lamerstu
Author's Response:Yeah, I mean, I appreciate the favorites but, really... could I at least get an "I read it" confirmation? XD
Um, I'm glad you liked the story -^.^- I put a lot of work into it (and I'm especially glad you liked the smut. Whew, I was really worried about that, 'cuz I'm fairly sure this story is the first time I've written all the way through one of those instead of cutting it off.
O.o Bad dog! Thesaurus's aren't meant for eating! [hugs her thesaurus] X3 I luffles my thesaurus.
-Archaic
So sad! *Sob sob* I love your stories! This story needs more reviews! With much love, care, and furballs, Uchiha Kitten! =^-^=
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-- Archaic Aphorism :Thankyou!
I trust Recita to be right when she says it's good, but it's very very nice to know that there are other people who think so.
Thankyou for taking the time to review!
-Archaic
*Sniffle Sniffle* ... *SOBS* SOoo Saaaddd! This is the complete opposite as the first atory I read! But hey, Neji's a whore now *I'm a pervie* So there's a plus. Who sings the song? I want to hear it now :)
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-- Archaic Aphorism :Guess what? You are now a story-saver. I was about fed up with people favoriting this without reviewing that I was going to delete it just to spite them...
And now, you have saved it. Congratulations, and heartfelt thankyous.
Usually I don't get upset when I don't get reviews, but I put so much effort into this that I was mad that no-one thought it was good enough to review (even though it was good enough to favorite!?) or even to flame it! Gr. But as I said, thankyou so much, you have saved it and made my effort worth the while!
The song and the band are in the summary, but I'll tell you again her, anyways. The song is Grand Theft Autumn/Where Is Your Boy? by the (almighty) Fall Out Boy. If you go to Youtube.com you can search: FOB Where Is Your Boy Tonight, and you will get the results. It's one of their earlier songs, before they got big and famous and stuff.
Thanks a million for reviewing, and I mean it- if I had a million dollars to give you, I would. Well, actually, maybe I wouldn't. But I'd least give you a hundred, if I had a million dollars to spare, lo.
Story-saver!
-Archaic