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Reviews For Colors

Name: emogirlS2 (Signed) · Date: 24/06/07 - 07:29 pm · For: Sleep Now
This story is awesome!! Please Update Soon!!!
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-- Kaji : Ah ^_^ Thanks so much! I hope I will soon, too.... ^^'


Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 18/06/07 - 04:17 pm · For: Sleep Now
How cute! ^_^ When Sasukes attacks!!!
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-- Kaji : Haehe ^_^ Fluff!


Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 14/06/07 - 12:21 pm · For: Chicken Soup
Chicken soup!? For the Yaoi soul!? I want that book!!! xD

Author's Response: Haha ^_^ You may well get one if I decide to make a whole fic from that... *cough* Well, not soon anyways ^___^


Name: JustAnotherSoul (Signed) · Date: 13/06/07 - 11:08 pm · For: Chicken Soup
Chicken soup for the Yaoi soul...

If only that existed... *cries*

Author's Response: Ah, but it may very well soon, neh? ^_^ Thank you!


Name: CrimsonClover (Signed) · Date: 10/06/07 - 10:20 am · For: Meet Your Agent
Hehehe... Ickle little Naru-muffin! He has to deal with Sasu and Granny now eh? I feel bad for teh little guy.

Per my usual Ty, I loved it. Even though it's short. (not cause your lazy, my ass)... *cough* Uh yeah...

Author's Response: I'm... not... too lazy... ehm... well... just a bit... ^___^ Naru-Muffin! Nyeah! Thankee, Sai!


Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 09/06/07 - 11:15 pm · For: Meet Your Agent
Sasuke that little sneak! xD Love da ringtone. LOL

Author's Response: Sasu a tricky lil' bastard, neh? ^_^ I thought it fit decently.


Name: puresugar13 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/07 - 10:05 pm · For: Meet Your Agent
kat so i finally decided to read this, and the only part that confused me was the cafe part.If you could explain what happened between Gaara and Naruto, then maybe I might get it ^.^' I feel really weird writing this! ^.^

Author's Response: Ah, that we'll get into again later ^__^ But... Naruto just wenr in there to get out of the rain and happened to meet some weird guy named Gaara who invited him to come and... ehm... you read it, neh? ^^''' Thanks!


Name: Sasuke_Luvr (Signed) · Date: 08/06/07 - 07:24 pm · For: Publisher's
Once again, Ty-kun.....I LOVED IT!!! WOOO!!! *glomps* You haven't been on MSN for awhile...Akina misses talking to you...*pouts* Ty-kun has to write more! PWEASSSSSSSSSSEEEEE??!! I give you cookies...*flashes cookies* xD *huggles* ME LUFFLES YOU!!! xP

Author's Response: Waahhhh!!! ^____^ Thankee-sai!!! Me so happy you like, my friend!!! I'm getting on MSN... ehm... right now! ^^'' YOSH! COOKIES!!!! ^_^ Thanksss youuu!!! *eats* Nyeah!


Name: invisible_habits (Signed) · Date: 08/06/07 - 06:13 pm · For: Publisher's
So you're Ty, I've seen your name around I think. Sorry I haven't been reading, cause now I haven't been a bad girl who reads and not reviews. I've been terribly busy, thus I only read fics that I had favorited and was told were updated. For some reason this apparently wasn't on that list, a fact that will change about fifteen seconds after I hit submit. Please don't drop this fic, I really do like it. I wanna see what part Gaara might play in the future, what happens at the meeting with Tsunade, anything your mind might come up with. I know exactly what it's like to just write as you go along, the story somehow tends to write itself and you suddenly have no idea how something turned out the way it did... I do hope you'll at least consider updating this every now and then Ty, it'd be sad to see it dropped...
//Ida, a.k.a. invisiblehabits

Author's Response: Thank you so much! ^_^ My name? Yes, I believe it has been in a few fics, none in a good light, though, I betcha. ^^' Nyeah... Gaara, Gaara, Gaara... Hmmm.... I have... an idea about what shall happen to him... Thanks, again, it means a lot ^_^


Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 08/06/07 - 01:16 pm · For: Publisher's
LOL Naru-muffin!

Author's Response: ^__^ I wuffle that name...


Name: CrimsonClover (Signed) · Date: 08/06/07 - 12:01 pm · For: Publisher's
Naru-muffin? Aww! *claps and bounces* This was cute Ty! Nya! Yay!

And don't delete this one too Ty... Jeez... Stop deleting everything!

Author's Response: Nyeah!! ^__^ I love teh muffin nameee! .... I'll think about it ^^'


Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 07/06/07 - 09:08 pm · For: Cold!
Poor Naruto. That driver is such an ass!

Author's Response: Yes... but Gaara is scary too... especially if Naru thought he was gonna get raped mid-day in public.... (Don't put anything past Gaara....) ^_^


Name: CrimsonClover (Signed) · Date: 07/06/07 - 08:46 pm · For: Cold!
*raises hand and bounces* Oh! I want you to keep it going Ty! Yay! Okay, enough with that.

Yeah, Naruto should have stayed in the damned cafe. Poor ickle. *hugs Naru*

Author's Response: Ah!!! ^____^ I shall try to, my friend! Yeah.... Gaara would scare most people, though....


Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 02/06/07 - 10:36 am · For: Uncomfortable...
HA! Poor Gaara I think he got turned down!

Author's Response: Ah! Maybe.... I wonder who's number that is though? Hnnnn....?


Name: CrimsonClover (Signed) · Date: 01/06/07 - 09:45 pm · For: Uncomfortable...
*giggles* Gaara's a babbler, eh? hehe... This was cute Ty. I'm glad that Gaara didn't do anything with Naru-kun. And if Gaara does call that number... I wonder what Sasu-chan's gonna do? Hn...

Author's Response: Who ever said that was Sasu's number? Hnnn ^^ We'll see..


Name: invisible_habits (Signed) · Date: 01/06/07 - 03:29 am · For: Water Water, Everywhere
This is quite amusing. I went through your older reviews, just to see if I left one when i read the beginning of it before ((I was a bad girl and didn't)), and came across Otahri's review of the 'Getting up'-chapter. The movie he/she is talking about it called Hero, or Ying xiong, in Chinese and came out in 2002. It was indeed directed by Zhang Yimou and I strongly suggest you see it as it is one of the most beautiful movies ever created.

The amusing thing is, I too was thinking of that movie while reading this fic. It's like a movie playing in my head while I read it, and it is in black and white part from the color details you give out; Naruto's hair, his scarf, Sasuke's shirt, Gaara's hair... It suits the mood of the story perfectly! Some details are lacking yes, but that only makes it interesting in my book and makes me long for more chapers so more secrets and details can be revealed. I think you're doing a wonderful job Kaji, and I hope you will carry this fic on.

One thing, just a detail that really doesn't matter and perhaps you changed the name on purpose. In the anime/manga Gaara is named Sabaku no Gaara, perhaps you got the word wrong. Otherwise, just ignore me. ^.^

Author's Response: Ah, no, thank you! I mispelled it... ^^'' ' I really must see this movie, then.... The review is so appreciated, my friend! This fic shall be continued. Secrets? Heheh.... I'm just an idiot writing as we go along... so... well... maybe... ehm... there.... There will be a secret(s)! Yes... ok.. just need to figure out what it/them will/shall be ^^'' I'm really glad the little "style" is working out, like a movie playing, you said. That was what I was trying for, but, I wasn't too very successful, especially in this chap -__-. But, I shall try to get it back in the next. Thanks so much and I'm really glad you like it! ^____^ (Ah, btw, I hate "Kaji", I had to change it... Just call me Aisu or Ty, hn? ^^''' Thanks)


Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 31/05/07 - 09:36 pm · For: Water Water, Everywhere
Gaara that dog! He's after Sasu-chan's naru-chan! xD next chapter soon! I wanna know what happens next!!!

Author's Response: Your gonna love what happens next if you like Gaara... *hint hint* ^___^ Cha! Thank you for reviewing! ^_^


Name: CrimsonClover (Signed) · Date: 31/05/07 - 08:27 pm · For: Water Water, Everywhere
Aw. Kuppo. It's not making me go wtf? like you promised... It made me go awwww ^^
Can't wait for the next chapter! ^^

Author's Response: Ya ^___^ Thanks, next chap.. hmmm...... well... I have an idea.... ^^'''


Name: Otahri (Signed) · Date: 30/05/07 - 07:59 am · For: Getting Up
This attempt of yours is brave. In fact, it reminded me of that Chinese movie that was directed by Zhang Yimou [I can't recall the name of the movie, but it was rather famous - I think it was called "A Man Named Hero" or something like that. Your usage of colors to capture the essence of the atmosphere of the moment is similar to his, and I would say that it is good. And revolutionary in a way. One drawback of your fic - okay, maybe I shouldn't really call it a drawback, more of a...specialty of your style - is that you drop a lot of insinuations and hints here and there, and I can only get a vague idea of what you are trying to get at. You see, when I read other fics, I could easily understand what the author is trying to tell. But in 'Colors', and only those who read twice would be able to pick it up. And even then, nothing much is clear for they would have to decipher it in ways that they like. In a way, it is new and refreshing, and I would no doubt keep track of this fic. Good luck and all the best.

Author's Response: That, my friend, is decidedly the most lengthy and informative review I have ever received. Thank you! The details that have been omitted, some, are not there for a reason. People see what they'd most like to see, hn? I honestly say I have no plot in mind, this just simply created as we merrily roll along. General to specific... like a good essay... everything gets more specific as we go. For now, everyone sees what they wish. Thanks again for the great review, and the criticism is greatly welcome. Adieu! - Kaji (Btw, I don't believe I know of that movie...)


Name: Mimiteufel (Signed) · Date: 29/05/07 - 07:49 pm · For: Getting Up
its so sweet and funny, i love it, its great, i can't wait for the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Ah ^___^ Thank you! It will be here soon.


Name: CrimsonClover (Signed) · Date: 29/05/07 - 06:42 pm · For: Getting Up
*giggles* Kuppo, you constantly tell me that I'm a good writer... But you know what? You're better than I am! So neh!

Anyway, I loves it. Can't wait for teh next chapter!!!

Author's Response: Neh, appreciated, but... my response to that... is... "my ass!" ^___^ I might be good, but never as good as you ^_^ Thankies!!!


Name: Sasuke_Luvr (Signed) · Date: 29/05/07 - 06:17 pm · For: Getting Up
WOOOOO!!! TY-KUN!!! *tackle glomps* *snuggles* I LUFFLES IT!!! MORE PWEASE??!!! *puppy doggy eyes* SQUEEE!!! *glomps again* ^_____^

Author's Response: OMG YAY! ^____^ Thankies Yoooouuuu!!!!!! More soon! ^_________________________^ *is glomped!*


Name: vivpiv (Signed) · Date: 29/05/07 - 03:45 am · For: Colors
Awsome!That was so romantic and beautiful.I love it!

Author's Response: ^__^ Thank you! So glad you like! ^_^


Name: Sasuke_Luvr (Signed) · Date: 29/05/07 - 02:37 am · For: Colors
TY-KUN!!! *glomps* *cuddles* I LOVE IT!!! Can't wait for the next part! ^__^

Author's Response: Chi-wah!!! *is glomped!* wOOt! ^____^ So happy ^__^ Thankies!


Name: emogirlS2 (Signed) · Date: 28/05/07 - 07:53 pm · For: Colors
Awww that was so sweet.

Author's Response: Thank you ^___^


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