Reviews For Caught in the Rain
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 10/03/08 - 07:11 pm · For: Chapter 1
Ahh... very nice way to tell a story, from the viewpoint of a young child- this withholds just the right amount of information, and gives the reader room for inference and imagination.
Seems you have a pretty good understanding of Japanese. Don't see that too often around here.
It's interesting how you characterize Itachi. But then again, he's still young in this story, so I don't really have a problem with that.
Anyways, I'll go check out your other story now. Maybe some things will make a bit more sense then. Good work.
Author's Response: I had the urge to write this one day, actually. There wasn't suppose to be anything more past this one-shot, but before I knew it the story had taken on a life of its own. It's strange now that I look back on it but I'm glad I wrote this. Thank you for your review. I actually have two Japanese phrase books that I use to get it right, referencing from both to make sure. -blush- However, at times I don't always get it right haha! Ah, Itachi. There was a time that I wanted to do one where she met Naruto, and I still do but for some reason when I wrote it, the story sudden routed toward Itachi, which was weird at the time. Now I'm glad it turned out that way, heh. I wanted to write him before he turns into a cold individual and see if there was any way to change him before he loses himself into his madness and grief. Being my third favorite character, I wanted to do something! lol. Thanks again. Ja.