Reviewer: puresugar13 Signed - Date: 03/04/07 - 04:11 pm - Title: Chapter 9:Before The Party Drama
This is getting good ^^ write more plz
Reviewer: Challa Signed - Date: 01/04/07 - 10:04 am - Title: Chapter 8:The "Situation"
I read the two first chapters, then pretty much just ran my eyes over the others.. You had an interesting idea behind this, but making the characters acting pretty much the same and adding the "kissy kiss" actions every five minutes made it a bit boring and predictable. I liked the idea, but you need to work more on your characters. Pretty good anyway. :)
Reviewer: puresugar13 Signed - Date: 25/03/07 - 07:42 pm - Title: Chapter 3:The Semi-Normal Day
