Reviews For The Newly Weds
Name: miss_tatiana (Anonymous) · Date: 19/12/07 - 09:12 pm · For: Home
lucky as hell chouji lol..
Name: miss_tatiana (Anonymous) · Date: 19/12/07 - 09:10 pm · For: Hawt Springs
i looved this chapter
Name: kagekage (Signed) · Date: 25/03/07 - 09:15 pm · For: Romping at The Beach
more please
Author's Response: Ok
Name: MistyNight (Signed) · Date: 24/03/07 - 01:25 pm · For: Later that night
Ok so I like the story itself, I really do, but you could do better at the grammar. For example, when you write ;" "I love you too" coo Temari as her set Hinata on the couch softly. " then its She, not her. And the ^^ smileys, dont really fit into the stories, we understand that they're happy and cute, we dont need the smileys to understand it.
Anyways, Nice Story, I like it ^^
Author's Response: Thanks for the critisism ^^ It'll only make my story better ^^
Author's Response: Holy fucking crap?!?! I just totally noticed all those little errors....
Name: Arconin (Signed) · Date: 16/03/07 - 04:46 pm · For: Flavor Text....
i cant wait for the sequel! ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks ^^ Coming sometime next month ^^
Name: Mimiteufel (Signed) · Date: 14/03/07 - 06:41 pm · For: Restless Night
that was funny the whole having to go pee thing incident anyways -the story is great but it is kinda short but thats ok great job on it, can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you so much ^^ It's going to be a lot of chapters that are short
Name: Mimiteufel (Signed) · Date: 13/03/07 - 06:35 pm · For: On the Way
awwwwwwwwwww how cute i really like the story its really great, can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: *Giggles* No prob, this is going to be my greatest project EVER!!!
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 13/03/07 - 06:06 pm · For: On the Way
more yuri plz oh mighty divine being
Author's Response: Ok ^^ It will get better at about Chap. 5 when they finally get their first "Together Smex"
Name: Karletta (Anonymous) · Date: 13/03/07 - 04:21 pm · For: Later that night
I loved it, cant wait for the rest to come out!!!
Author's Response: Aww thanks you very much ^^