that wasn't verry clear to follow it made no sence watsoever

This fanfic sucks ass. I get your point but...really? And I doubt Sasuke-bastard would be a virgin. But I bet my bottom dollar Naruto would. Wanna know why? Beacause he simply is naive when it comes to those things. And I could also imagine him blushing when asked if he was a virgin or not, which indicates he probally is. Yes in the series he has a bit of a temper, which *suprise* he also does in fanfics. But he does have this cluelessness about him also in the series, not to mention he's adorable! Males can be adorable, and not just when their five either. Another thing. Sakura ( oh how I hate her) doesnt have the same bond with Sasuke as Naruto does. There were so many girls that oooed and ahhed over Sasuke, and *fucking surprise* Sakura just happened to be one of them! She only liked Sasuke because he was cool, goodlooking, a genius, and was exellent at sparring. Naruto on the other hand was loud ( still goodlooking in my opinion ) a boneheaded klutz and was known as a complete failure. Sakura didnt pay no mind to Naruto, but insisted on pursuing 'Sasuke-Kun' just so she could brag to Ino or some other chick about how she absolutely had the coolest guy in all of Konoha-or maybe even the world! But even though Naruto wanted just one date she could'nt because Naruto was just uncool. Shallow much? But sadly for her Naruto is closer to Sasuke. Well... not in that way, but he should be. Naruto does so much for Sasuke, and to my utter annoyance Sakura! I swear if the Naruto series were mainly SasuNaru I swear it would make things better.If I had my way the show would BE SasuNaru. Because having Sakura chase after what would never be hers, and watching her cry over it would make me feel happy. I'm bursting in tears of joy just from the thought! So instead of making a fanfic thats whining about cheesy SasuNaru fanfics ( and yes i hate them just as much, and I dont like to be disapointed when it comes to SasuNaru fanfics ) try to please write something besides a corny SasuNaru fanfic stating how they hate other corny SasuNaru fanfics, and write a story with a plot-scheme along with some twists and turns leading to the climax, and then the ending. Like I said before, I get your point but...really?

.... This was beautiful... absolutely beautiful.

This is amazing! I LOVE sasunaru but yeah, I agree. There are some really good in character fics, though. You just havta look hard ;]

LOL!

ok wtf sure some oocness is weriod but love scenes between sasunaru is hot

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To the people who oppose this fic: remember FREEDOM OF SPEECH.

To author: This is hilarious! 'empty their stomachs on their keyboards' haha XD

It's pretty hilarious that i just finished reading a fic exactly like the one this parodies. I hate Sakura bashing, sure she's a bitch, but she isn't evil. Also loved that you pointed out how most authors make virgin characters so experienced with no back story.

erm........ i can KINDA see where your coming from, but the whole point of a fanfic is that it's totally FICTION, it's not meant to be taken to heart. although i do agree with you that having naruto raped as a child is disusting!!!!!and that the over use of sex is gutt turning . but if they do have naruto as submisive then i'm just glad it's him not sasuke! cos that just doesn't sit well with me! but at least it's better than some sicko writting a itasasu don't ya think?
plus him being a quiter is soooo not true cos he does have other friends!!!!!!

This is completely hilarious... I read those cliche fics out of boredom and this sums up about all of them I've read. Of course, there was one fic I read which dealt with Itachi raping Naruto (Red Light District on ff.net, I believe) and it was a good story... of course it was an AU... So, yeah. Sweet story.

lol friggin hilarious!