Reviews For Dreams Of A Shinobi
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 30/11/11 - 02:53 am · For: Chapter 5: Coming Soon!
awesome...
update plz >_
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 30/11/11 - 02:53 am · For: Chapter 4: Welcome to Konoha
yep...
as all the others said...
plz continue this story it is awesome..!!!
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 30/11/11 - 02:52 am · For: Chapter 3: The Forest Of Death
hmm...
nice :)
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 30/11/11 - 02:51 am · For: Chapter 2: Enter Naruto Uzumaki!
haha...
nice:D
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 30/11/11 - 02:51 am · For: Chapter 1: This Is A Ninja?
woah...
kool... :D
kris huh?
interesting :D
Name: sasuke_naruto_rivals (Signed) · Date: 27/04/07 - 03:26 am · For: Chapter 5: Coming Soon!
i's good. keep it up.
Name: THEKINGOFSOMEWHERE (Anonymous) · Date: 05/08/06 - 01:20 pm · For: Chapter 5: Coming Soon!
Great story so far Jonah, you should really continue as soon as you get the time and inspiration to continue it.
Name: Gaara (Not my whole name) (Anonymous) · Date: 01/08/06 - 07:37 am · For: Chapter 2: Enter Naruto Uzumaki!
I liked it. Keep up the good work!
Name: Joshicka (Anonymous) · Date: 01/08/06 - 03:44 am · For: Chapter 4: Welcome to Konoha
Good, good. Shikamaru is awesome. That'd be a nice jutsu to have.. >> Anyway, why do yoouuu get to train with Hinata? >< *pouts*
You better put me in the story too. And you better make me be able to do cool stuff ><
And you better make me have to fight you at some point ;)
Best chapter yet.
Name: Joshie (Anonymous) · Date: 01/08/06 - 03:34 am · For: Chapter 3: The Forest Of Death
Omfg. You, jumping 15 feet into the air? Psh. AND, YOU becoming a SHINOBI?
I have a great idea for a chapter in the book. Hehehe.. I'll tell you later :D
Hint: It includes me.
Name: Josh~ (Anonymous) · Date: 01/08/06 - 03:28 am · For: Chapter 2: Enter Naruto Uzumaki!
OH NOES!! You gotses a demon that's gonna eat your head and go rawr and gonna eat yooouuu!!
You're right, Naruto DOES say believe it a lot in this story. And he's a lot dumber, too. Anyway, back to reviewing. You could've put a little bit more into describing Naruto and Kakashi, but not too much more. As in the last chapter, there are many misspellings and grammar errors. I'd be willing to edit the story and fix them for you if you wish. Pretty good story, Jonah. 8/10.
Name: Josh (Anonymous) · Date: 01/08/06 - 03:21 am · For: Chapter 1: This Is A Ninja?
Very nice. Kris is such a silly person. You described him pretty good. Not the best writing I've seen, but still pretty good. I like the fact that you included me in the second to last line. Well anyway, not the best work I've seen, enjoyable, not too long, pretty good descriptions of the people we know.. I give it.. A 7/10.
Name: winry (Anonymous) · Date: 31/07/06 - 08:28 am · For: Chapter 1: This Is A Ninja?
that was good but your character is cursed
Author's Response: heh yeah, ull see more of that soon.
Name: AkiraHatesYou (Anonymous) · Date: 31/07/06 - 07:09 am · For: Chapter 4: Welcome to Konoha
I like it. You're doing a terrific job! : ]
Author's Response: wow thanks ^^
Name: Scar Tissue (Signed) · Date: 30/07/06 - 10:56 pm · For: Chapter 1: This Is A Ninja?
::claps:: much better, nice edit. ::grins:: and good descriptions of Kris's daily life. He certainly is my shadow, and me and Court are always hitting him for some stupid thing he's done.
When he calls my parents usually say "Hey tosh, your shadow is on the phone" xD
Author's Response: haha ok thanks for the advice earlier it helped ^^
Name: Scar Tissue (Signed) · Date: 30/07/06 - 07:56 pm · For: Chapter 1: This Is A Ninja?
Ha so in character for everyone ::sticks tongue at you:: But you know I still don't like Billy. Haha, but yeah ::thumbs up:: great chapter, could use a little more detail.
Name: thelovelymoose1 (Signed) · Date: 30/07/06 - 07:50 pm · For: Chapter 2: Enter Naruto Uzumaki!
it's a good story line, but if your gonna write about yourself, you should write in first person.
Author's Response: thanks for the advice, but i dont think thats a good idea right now, ive already wrote down the first couple of chapters my way, too late to change it now i guess, unless more people want me too
Name: Danielle (Anonymous) · Date: 30/07/06 - 05:43 pm · For: Chapter 4: Welcome to Konoha
Wow! you have awesome writing skills. I'm not really interested in the whole naruto thing but this story was awesome. You should consider writing a book with all this stuff.
Author's Response: yeah, thanks, i still have to improve my writing skills tho
Name: THEKINGOFSOMEWHERE (Anonymous) · Date: 30/07/06 - 03:55 pm · For: Chapter 4: Welcome to Konoha
Very interesting dude, it's looking like a great story so far, you should definately continue writing it. I like the reaction to the ninja powers to.
Author's Response: oh yeah, uhm thanks phil