Reviews For Shadow of the Wolf
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 11/11/13 - 09:29 pm · For: Chapter 2
If you wish to post your pictures onto the site you have to go to the part where the HTML link is able for copying and pasting take that code link and paste it into where you would like it being presented to your story/bio. On photobucket the HTML code is on the left hand side. Make sure you copy the entire code correctly and paste it correctly or it will not work. This method also works in banners but, remember to check TONFA's rules for how big the picture can be in the banner for there is a rule, just can't remember. Good luck.
Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 07/11/13 - 12:12 pm · For: Chapter 7
Great chapter, glad to see the story updated :)
Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 16/10/13 - 06:18 am · For: Not exactly a new chapter
Sorry to hear about school, I was really enjoying your story. I'll keep an eye out for when you do get back to writing it. :(
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/09/13 - 03:49 pm · For: Chapter 3
I cannot say whether or not the fanfic will ever be continued, but you should check out Silverwolf1213's story, Reincarnation of a Legend. Based on this story I think you'd find it interesting, though I may be wrong. Anyway, the spacing was fixed in this chapter, so the only mistakes I saw really were punctuation and maybe the occasional grammatical/spelling error everyone has.
So far I really like your story. It's a bit of a cliche, but that doesn't matter as long as you make it your own (like I have an Uchiha sibling fanfic that most say isn't like most Uchiha sibling fanfics). So far I don't know too much of Tsukiko's actual personality, though that is not a bad thing since I want to learn about her as the story progresses and so far I've found her interesting. Another thing that stuck out was the Asuma and Kurenai thing. Although they were, in fact, a part of the ten jounins to get a squad, nobody nobody knee just which jounin would have teams in the end, so I'm not sure why they'd be there. Kakashi was always more of a loner, so he wouldn't likely have house guests often. Tsukiko and Kakashi's interaction was very sweet again. Lucky girl was able to see Kakashi's face. But now she gets to have more lessons with him XD. Oh, and Akumu's appearance mentally was pretty wicked. Only curiosity is how Kakashi knew how to teach Tsukiko how to do it.
Once again, nice chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the response, i'll surely check out the reincarnation of a legend. Sorry about the grammer and stuff, I never was that good at it. Fanfic's aren't my thing so my story being cliche was pretty pretty much anticipated :D, this one was just sort of like an experiment or something and I had to do a shitload of research to get my facts straight. I'll keep trying and hopefully the rest of my story will get better. BTW, i'll try not to make it super freaking cliche :D, you better tell me if it gets that way so i can fix it.
Author's Response: Thanks for the response, i'll surely check out the reincarnation of a legend. Sorry about the grammer and stuff, I never was that good at it. Fanfic's aren't my thing so my story being cliche was pretty pretty much anticipated :D, this one was just sort of like an experiment or something and I had to do a shitload of research to get my facts straight. I'll keep trying and hopefully the rest of my story will get better. BTW, i'll try not to make it super freaking cliche :D, you better tell me if it gets that way so i can fix it.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/09/13 - 03:31 pm · For: Chapter 2
Okay, I used to do bios at the start of some of my stories so I understand it. Now, however, I've grown to learn for most readers it's more fun to learn about the characters throughout the story. Also, there were a handful of mistakes such as punctuation, and spacing. Usually on here people double space because indents don't work so the piece doesn't look so cluttered. There may have been more but I've forgotten them.
Overall she sounds like an interesting character. I don't 100% understand the Asumu thing. I'm sure we'll learn more about him later though. I think he's another type of demon, so I'm eager to see what his story is. Her reactions to some things also make her seem more unique. Such an instance includes her reaction to the Uchiha clan I think this was a great show at her youth since she didn't seem to truly grasp the situation. Unless life really doesn't have much value to her, which could be the case for all I know. Her questioning of THE book had me laughing. Gosh, Kakashi shouldn't leave that in the reach of her young hands =P. All of the scenes were really cute and have me eager for the actual story.
Nice start, Terrawolfs.
Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 22/09/13 - 02:59 pm · For: Chapter 5
I'm enjoying reading about the bell test, Kakashi um yeah! lol
Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 19/09/13 - 08:28 am · For: Chapter 4
Another great chapter!
Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 17/09/13 - 03:57 am · For: Chapter 3
Yeah I was happy to see another chapter done! Great job, you're on a roll!
Author's Response: thanks, :P I would have updated yesterday if I hadn't had to study for a stupid math test
Name: Fire_and_Ice (Signed) · Date: 15/09/13 - 12:18 pm · For: Chapter 2
Well this is looking pretty good! :D apart from a few minor spelling/grammatical errors, I see lots of promise :) keep it up, I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I'll try to fix that :D
Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 12/09/13 - 05:21 am · For: Chapter 1
Great job! I like it, Kakashi is one of my favorite characters. Please keep writing!
As far as uploading I used Photobucket and the copied the html(I think)kink to this site. Hope that kind of helps
Author's Response: Thank you so much :) you can probably tell but this is the first Fanfic i've ever written and i'm quite unsure of myself... I was so freaked out when i saw that there was a response because i thought it would be bad. You don't know how much this review means to me and btw thanks for the uploading thing, i'll see if it works
Author's Response: Thank you so much :) you can probably tell but this is the first Fanfic i've ever written and i'm quite unsure of myself... I was so freaked out when i saw that there was a response because i thought it would be bad. You don't know how much this review means to me and btw thanks for the uploading thing, i'll see if it works