Reviews For Control: A Mother's Legacy
Name: coolninja90kid (Signed) · Date: 17/04/15 - 10:34 pm · For: Entry
i liked it
Name: sexyboy (Signed) · Date: 10/06/14 - 12:46 pm · For: Entry
hey can i be in the story?
Name: Fire_and_Ice (Signed) · Date: 02/08/13 - 10:30 pm · For: Wherein I get my first glimpse of Danzo
Woo! Things are looking pretty great! :D I'm getting really into this story, marvelous job so far~
Author's Response: If you like those chapters then you'll love the latest one! Thanks!
Name: Fire_and_Ice (Signed) · Date: 02/08/13 - 08:17 am · For: Entry
Yay! I think I'm going to like this story! :) I feel like it might have been a bit rushed, and maybe too easy, but overall I'm quite satisfied~ it's a nice concept, and I love the thing with her mother, the necklace, and the dream! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. A positive review for the first chapter on the first day, with notes. Quite heartening. I noticed that it did seem a little rushed around the fifth time I re-read it, but I'd already posted it and didn't really want to take it down, so I decided to try to catch the rest of chapters instead. It does seem a tad too easy to be in the Juvi category, but in future it will be much darker. The concept and the category are linked. I haven't really found OC fics like this so I wrote my own.