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Reviews For Never Too Late

Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 08/01/15 - 02:07 pm · For: Meeting the Team
Haha I like Kina! She seems like she wil be a really fun character to read about. I liked how she interacted with everyone, of course, especially Sasuke. It makes me wonder how staying with him will affect him. I can't wait to read the sparring match also. Awesome update Itoko! Update soon


Name: Fire_and_Ice (Signed) · Date: 26/07/13 - 10:50 pm · For: Departure for the Leaf
Looks very promising! You've got me, let me tell you! I'll be looking for the future chapters~ :)

Author's Response: Glad you think so. I was wondering where you were. After all, you were one of the people who wanted more of this XD. I'm glad I've got you hooked and I hope you enjoy the future chapters as well.


Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 25/07/13 - 01:56 pm · For: Departure for the Leaf
hahaha... how will i not Love it? XD
it was really good :D .

so Naruto's team huh? interesting :P
lesse how much similar it will be with the old one...(as if i remember any of it ._.)

haha Kiba XD
wanna know what happens with Sasuke and the other guy around XP

Mei Terumi seemed really different .
though we haven't seen the Village leader part of her in the canon.. or well.. atleast i haven't read of it...
so it was a good way to show her there . plus she was new to the work... so she's still learning..
quite different then Tsunade :P

the chapter was really good overall :D
didn't hear from Shino O.o
but he rarely ever even talks XD he's barely noticable... so u got him in character too there XD

and lol at her antiques XP
can't wait to read more from Kina :D

and answer is 2 weeks time!

or... maybe 1 week? ._.

Author's Response: Well, you're biased, so =P. Still glad you liked it, though. You should have remembered that from before, silly. It's going to be similar to begin with, in a way, but also there's quite a few big differences. I was going to clarify this later, but I just see Kiba as a natural flirt because of a few fanfics I've read, but he won't really play a real role as a love interest. More like just something I did for fun. Yeah, I thought she was different than she should be, but I didn't really have the chance to show some of her other characteristics. Plus she has two or three years between now and when she is first introduced and, like you said, she is just starting. Hopefully if she appears again it'll be better. Haha, yeah. Very little with Shino. I just couldn't figure out how to show him in this chapter. If anything he'll appear next chapter a little bit. Also as you said, he's just a character that tries to blend into the background, which was why there wasn't very much. Kina is a fun character, and I hope you enjoy in the chapters to come, too. Hm... I'll give you the answer next chapter. You'll just have to wait and see ;).


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 23/07/13 - 11:26 pm · For: Departure for the Leaf
I really like Kina. She seems like a super nice person and really friendly to boot. Can't wait to see the training match between her and Kiba. Update soon

Author's Response: You didn't really read too much of this before, did you? Yeah, you get to meet Kina a lot earlier here, so I'm glad you really met her for once and got to know her. Heh. Her niceness and friendliness stuck out then, huh? Good ^.^. Well, sorry to say you won't get it. Similar to the first, you won't get to see Kina's skills for a few more chapters depending on their sizes.


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 23/07/13 - 10:46 pm · For: Gone
Wow the emotion was all so vivid in this. The thoughts and actions were so detailed. I loved all of it. Very nice!

Author's Response: Um.... I'm glad you liked it, but I'm just curious - did you mean to review twice?


Name: Hazard (Signed) · Date: 23/07/13 - 10:31 pm · For: Preview
This is a concept I've thought about writing myself before...and now instead I can read you're story! Keep the chapters coming!

Author's Response: Really? Glad to see I'm not the only one thinking this stuff. I'll try to keep these chapters coming because I'm enjoying it a lot more than the first time.


Name: TeamWorkIsKey (Signed) · Date: 05/07/13 - 09:58 am · For: Preview
Nice preview you've got here. I have to admit, I thought it was cute when Kina said she believed in Sasuke and when he took a seat next to her. I wonder what you might change that sentence too. Gosh, you've got me even more excited with this. I can't wait until more comes along. When it does, I'll definitely be writing more of a review. Good work, Sasaui!

Author's Response: Hehe. Yeah, I liked that part. I'm eager to get to it because I just love SasuKina. I've changed it, though since you don't know the name that well, you probably won't realize the meaning. Hehe. Good. Guess that means you'll come back to read more ^.^ And the preview did as it was supposed to. I'm eager to read your reviews. Thank you very much, Monica-chan.


Name: Purple Dinosaur (Signed) · Date: 04/07/13 - 09:01 pm · For: Gone
A twist to the plot, hm? I wonder how this will turn out.

Author's Response: I'm glad your curious. It's what I meant to do ^.^


Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 03/07/13 - 11:13 am · For: Gone
Oh My God...
this totally a different start than the previous one O_O
and trust me i remember how Kina-chan's fic P

Kakashi sounded so kakashi-like :D idk what better compliment to give :P
and haha... poor tsunade... having to always deal with those old creeps XD
i personally think Tsunade would rather have them killed then Orochimaru XD
anyways... off topic here ._.
You know,
while i was reading the fic...
I couldn't help but notice how much your writing has matured...
it felt like it was such a professional fic... one on par with even Urufu-chan...
and when i say that, i don't mean ur writing is not better than her's i'm just sayin considering the age difference,.. that's one heck of an accomplishment... coz well she is my favorite author after all P

so Kudos Puny-chan!
can't wait to see Kina-chan in action ;D

Author's Response: Haha. Yeah, this story should be different from the original. Probably quite different, actually. Heh. You really did enjoy the original NTL, huh? So in other words he was in character? I was really hoping so. I like Kakashi and he's really fun to write, but I wasn't sure I got him. Glad to know you think so. Yeah, I really hate the Elders. They are epically annoying. I don't think I really had any development from them in the last story. Now, however, I remembered the old bags. I think Orochimaru is creepy, but the elders are definitely more annoying. Haha. I actually agree it has matured. I've read my old stuff, and I just can't help but shake my head in shame. Though not sure how my writing for NTL was since I haven't read it in a while. Haha. There is no way I'm on par with Silverwolf. I noticed quite a few mistakes while reading it. Just can't remember where XD. Heh. I'm sure she was writing as well or better than me at this age. Still, thank you very much, Shadow-san ^.^


Name: TeamWorkIsKey (Signed) · Date: 29/06/13 - 06:27 pm · For: Gone
Thanks for reminding me you had a new version when you reviewed my story. I meant to review this one a while back, but I think I forgot. (My memory isn't too good for some reason. Head trauma probably :P) Anyway, I really like how this turned out, especially with how you wrote Sasuke actually being taken back. Most people don't write it as well as you did.

So he's got some thinking to do. Good job with the choices he has too. The options are some that I can see being given to him in Naruto if it happened. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Hehe. Didn't mean to get you to read it =P. Head trauma? Oh, I hope not. Then you may forget your wonderful thoughts for you story. Really? I've never read anything else with him being brought back, so I wouldn't know. All I know is I seem to have a better grasp than I did last time. I'm glad you see it as realistic, and I hope you continue to enjoy it in the chapters to come.


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 07/06/13 - 08:44 am · For: Gone
I liked this very much. Kakashi is good at pursuading at least in the method he took. Everything else was awesome so keep it up!

Author's Response: I'm glad you think so, Itoko-san ^.^ Well, it was the only real method I could see working at the time. I'm glad you liked it and hope you continue to.


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