TONFA
The Original Naruto Fanfic Archive

Main Categories

Het Romance [1092]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around different sex couples.
Alternate Universe & Crossovers [651]
Where cast of the Naruto Universe are inserted into an alternate universe.
Essays & Tutorials [17]
An area to submit intelligent essays debating topics about the Naruto Universe and writing tutorial submissions.
 
General Fiction [1739]
Any Naruto fanfiction focused without romantic orientation, on a canon character in the current Naruto Universe.
OC-centric [865]
Any Naruto fanfic that has the major inclusion of a fan-made character.
Non-Naruto Fiction [291]
Self-evident
 
Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance [1575]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around male same sex couples.
MadFic [194]
Any fic with no real plot and humor based. Doesn't require correct spelling, paragraphing or punctuation but it's a very good idea.
 
Shojo-ai/Yuri Romance [106]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around female same sex couples.
Fan Ninja Bingo Book [125]
An area to store fanfic information, such as bios, maps, political histories. No stories.
 
 

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Members: 11985
Series: 261
Stories: 5884
Chapters: 25418
Word count: 47689150
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Reviews For Live Or Die

Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 17/08/12 - 02:51 pm · For: Chapter 1
There are a lot of mistakes sentence wise, and I believe they're mostly run-ons. Also, every time someone knew speaks, there needs to be a new paragraph. Also, a little at the end you were repetitive, saying how her blood dropped on the blossom twice, just worded differently. Also, how deep into winter is it? Because if there's that much snow, I'm not sure she'd be able to really find a sakura blossom or if it would rain. But, again, that just depends on how far into it is.

So far the story is interesting, especially since I love Gaara. And your character's mind set is very interesting. I look forward to seeing her grow, both because of how she is and the fact Gaara's teaching her. Other than mistakes, I actually found your writing enjoyable to read. It just...... Hm...... I'm not entirely sure how to explain it, to tell the truth. But I highly enjoyed it nevertheless.


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