Reviews For Origin Unknown
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 19/06/12 - 08:17 am · For: 1
Oh my gosh... Well now I just feel especially dumb for not catching on until the last part T_T I can't believe I didn't realize it...
Well... Other than my lapse in understanding the hints, this was still a very good story. It hurt my eyes because it was so gosh darn long, but I think I deserve it for previously writing chapters that reached this length XD This was a really creative story, something I was really impressed with. The connections were great and the buildup was smooth. I loved it, nice job!
Author's Response: I don't think 11k words would qualify as a one shot. I had the option to break it down but I was determined to release it in one page for the sake of those who wouldn't be able to guess right away. I didn't want early feedback with correct guesses which was very likely. The identity got less significant as the story progressed anyway so not to worry about not catching on. Thanks very much for reading it straight through though. Hope your eyes feel better. ^^
Name: winterstrife (Signed) · Date: 18/06/12 - 11:55 am · For: 1
I thought this was very well done. It was interesting to see how Sai might fit into the Uchiha family, and the circumstances around his birth, and I think you did an especially good job creating the original character of his father, and the backstory of the artist-nin clan. The pieces at the end, with the crows, his arrival in Konoha, and the influence on Itachi's jutsu were also very interesting. So... yeah, good job. Keep it up with the great ideas!
Author's Response: Thank you! ^^