Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 04/04/12 - 10:48 am · For: Epilogue...
Sasaui U: T_T *holds up scythe*
Put down the scythe, Sasaui. You can't kill Itoko-san!
Okay, I guess the moment I saw he was dead, my first thought was the good guys started resurrecting. I can't believe he's just, well, dead. I mean, it's Shizake. How can he be dead? He was so great and strong and.....
Darn you, Itoko-san! Now I'm crying because of you. So many people cared about Shizake. Heck, I even cared about Shizake. This just isn't fair. This is just.......
Okay, I guess I just went through went through most of the four stages of Kubler Ross's stages of grief and have now fell into acceptance after staring at my iPod for a while trying to figure out what to say.
It was a truly great series with a truly great oc who I can only describe as a hero. A true hero that very few people can become. He willingly gave his life just so Naruto could win. I just feel bad for all the others that care for him. I hope that they can find someway to heal the wound I know is in their hearts.
To a wonderful oc and a true hero
RIP
Shizake Uchiha
Author's Response: I know Sasaui...I know...He was a great ninja. Never to be forgotten. I'm glad you cared about him as a character, it brings a smile upon my face. I hope I didn't make you cry while you were in class...If I did im so sorry. I'm glad you stuck with the whole series. Thank you so much reviewing Itoko.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 04/04/12 - 10:34 am · For: Chapter 198
Wait wait wait. What? No, he can't be dead. Shizake is, well, Shizake. He just can't....... Right?
Author's Response: ...
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/04/12 - 07:07 pm · For: Epilogue...
Wait... That's it?! No warning about the ending was coming, no resurrection of our protagonist, just his funeral?!?! Shizake-san, WHY?!?!
*slams head against the desk for ten minutes*
I have brain damage now, darn it! This is all your fault!
*sigh* This was seriously a great series. It went on so well. I feel so attached to Shizake, so for you to kill him like that.... It does make me cry a little.... Okay, it makes me cry a lot....
Gah, it's over! I can't believe it's over! Now I'm depressed that there is such a tragic ending... Such a tragic ending to a great series.... *sigh*
Author's Response: I grinned really big when I read this review. I'm not mocking you, I just feel so accomplished now. My aim was to make the reader cry...heh. Thank you so much for sticking with the whole series. I really do appreciate it. Thanks you so much wolf-chan :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/04/12 - 06:30 pm · For: Chapter 198
O_O
Author's Response: I know...
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 03/04/12 - 08:28 am · For: Chapter 197
What?! You're ending it there?! That is so not cool, Shizake-san. These were most definitely epic battles. I can't wait for the next chapter so I can read more. And I really want to see if any other things are gonna happen to the heroes. After all, they never seem to have good luck.
Author's Response: Well for this chapter yes :P Haha I was typing this up while listening to epic music so that definitely helped :D Guess you'll have to read the next chapter. Coming up very soon! Thanks for reviewing!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 03/04/12 - 08:20 am · For: Chapter 196
Sheesh. With all the goodbyes you have me worried something bad is gonna happen. I know it may just be because of how dangerous the battle is, but you still have me worried.
But it's also because it's the final chapter I'm sure it'll be epic. I can't wait to see this final push. Or I guess I'd say read the final push.
Author's Response: Lol I didnt mean to worry you. Sorry! Haha well it's not the final chapter...haha thanks for reviewing!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 02/04/12 - 06:47 pm · For: Chapter 197
I read this before and then you deleted it! I was so upset that I couldn't review before :P
Anyway.... So much epic and intense stuff going on! And then you ended it at the best part! You're very good with cliffhangers, so I'm not sure if that's a compliment or not.
Great job on this, Shizake-san! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Haha my bad. There were some minor changes I needed to make :P. Haha Thank you, I'll take it as a compliment :) Thanks for the review wolf-chan!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 02/04/12 - 03:01 pm · For: Chapter 196
The sappiness of this chapter is bringing me so close to tears! Please don't kill anyone! Please no comas or deaths or anything, I think I really would cry if something seriously bad happened to them in this final fight!
Great job on the goodbyes and sweet conversations though! I did like this chapter, it's just going to be really hard to watch everyone go into battle and possibly get hurt. Anyway, keep up the incredible work!
Author's Response: I'm so sorry! I didn't want to bring you to tears! I just thought since it was the final battle everyone would say their goodbyes. Just let me say the next chapter is beyond epic! Like seriously! Thanks for the review wolf-chan!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 02/04/12 - 07:04 am · For: Chapter 195
Sasaui: You know what? I'm really starting to like this story better.
Me: wait wait wait wait! What's wrong with my story?
Sasaui: Well, for starters, at least in this story I'm not COMPLETELY MENTALLY AND PHYSICALLY ABUSED!!!!
Me: *sigh* Whatever, Sasaui. Anyway, this was an awesome chapter. The battle was totally epic. I can't wait to see what you have in store for the heroes next. I'm sure it will be great. I can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Haha I'm glad you like is Sasaui. You are a main character :P The next update will be here very soon :D I'm glad you liked and thanks for the review Sasaui-chan!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 02/04/12 - 06:46 am · For: Chapter 194
What is with bad guys and resurrection? It's so unfair because the goods guys can't do it because, well, that's just not how good guys work......
Why do I have a feeling this war isn't over yet? For some reason, I can't imagine things being that easy for them. Anyway, these were some epic battles. I hope there's more epicness in the next chapter. Then again, knowing you, there must be.
Author's Response: Oh the war isn't over of course. The final push needs to be made and the Tosokage needs to be killed for it to be over. So there is more to come :D Thanks for the review!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 30/03/12 - 07:16 pm · For: Chapter 195
Oh my gosh, this war is just terrible! It should be illegal to resurrect people! It's like cheating, I swear! And the good guys are losing so many soldiers, and the Dusk ninja just keep coming back to life! That's not fair! :(
Well anyway, great work on this! Keep up the amazing job with this story, Shizake-san! You're doing great!
Author's Response: I'm aiming to make this a complex war which I guess I have accomplished :P don't worry the heroes always make a comeback though :D thanks for the review
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/03/12 - 04:16 pm · For: Chapter 194
How unfair is that! Resurrecting the dead troops! That's like cheating! *sigh*
You definitely accomplished the epicness in here, good job! Now everyone is so exhausted, I hope they're all right.... Can't wait to read more! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Haha isn't it? Luckily Sasuke can think on his feet. If they are tired now...well they are in for a big treat! Thanks for the review!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/03/12 - 03:27 pm · For: Chapter 193
*facepalm* So many wars.... Why can't everyone just live happily ever after! Stupid Dusk ninja ruining everything....
Now I'm really excited and in suspense for this upcoming war. It really can't be as easy as they initially thought, something is going to go wrong. It always does >_<
Good job on this chapter though! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: I know :P Some people are just too evil...*sigh* Im going to try and make this war as epic as possible. Haha and you are right! Twists! Thanks for the review!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 28/03/12 - 02:42 pm · For: Chapter 193
Is it bad that as I was reading this, my mind began to think of bad things that could happen to Sasaui......,?
Anyway, ANOTHER WAR? Sheesh. They rarely get any piece. Poor people. Oh well. I'm sure they're used to it by now =D. I can't wait for your next update. I really want to see where this war is going. Great job, Shizake-san!
Author's Response: Eh probably :P Then again who doesn't think of bad things that could happen to their OC's. Yup! Another one...not as big as the other one but still a major event. I'll be updating very soon...maybe today even :D Thanks for the review
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 27/03/12 - 01:19 pm · For: Chapters 186-192
This is so weird! I'm used to imagining Sasaui with the person she's going to be with, so it's really strange seeing her with someone else. They're really cute together. Don't get me wrong. It's just different.
The battle here was epic. I'm so glad Nitachi was finally able to avenge Nitachi. It seems like that's the point from which the healing will probably truly begin for him.
Author's Response: Haha I know what you mean :P It must be weird. I just figured her and Nitatchi would make a good couple. Haha Nitatchi was able to avenge Nitatchi? I know you mean Ino :P. And yes you are right the healing begins now :)
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 27/03/12 - 01:02 pm · For: Chapters 181-185
I don't know why, but Sasuke's threat at the end made me laugh. Other than that (and the end) it was a pretty sad chapter. I feel so bad for Nitachi and Shezji. I hope Sasaui can help them with their pain even more.
Author's Response: Haha I knew I had to make Sasuke do that because he has a protective personality you know? Sasaui is a big help btw :D
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/03/12 - 06:17 pm · For: Chapters 176-180
*sigh* I knew you were going to do it, but it still really hurt reading it. I mean, I like what's going to happen because of it, but I have knowing the pain Shizake and Natachi are going through. It's just so sad. And we can't forget poor Shezji. I can't wait until the happiness I know they'll find later. It's just so..... Dang it, Sasaui! I'd yell at you you should have made sure they were dead, but..... Well, I know for sure that's not you.
Author's Response: I know :/ I usuaslly not mean to my OC's but this time I had to be. It all sucks and what not and I hated writing it but the end is at least somewhat happy. I know it sucks Im sorry. I hope you read on. Thanks for the review!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/03/12 - 06:13 pm · For: Chapters 171-175
Go, Sasaui, go! Kick their butts. I loved how you did the ending to their fight. I thought it was really cool and loved how Sasaui's protective side came bursting out. It makes me think of the chapter where she does the same thing for Chouji. I really like how you've added Sasaui into your story, Shizake-san, and I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Haha i totally planned out this chapter ahead of time. I had the whole scene in my head, all I had to do was write it. Glad you liked it! Haha I had to show her guardian powers sooner or later :D
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/03/12 - 06:09 pm · For: Chapters 166-170
I love every time Sasaui and one of the guys talk. It's just so sweet and touching because of how they're all trying to catch up. I can't wait to see what's going to happen on the mission. Knowing this story, something's going to to wrong.
Author's Response: I wanted to strengthen their bonds right off the bad. Might as well talk about some personal things. Haha something always goes wrong :P
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/03/12 - 06:06 pm · For: Chapters 162-165
Yeah! Sasaui joins in the fun! I can't wait to see how she affects everything. I'm just so excited. Oh, and thanks for the shout out. I really appreciate it, Shizake-san. Even if it did stop us from torturing Silverwolf =P. Though I really loved this chapter. The meeting of Sasaui and the others was really sweet.
Author's Response: Finally you got to this part :) She has a huge affect on the story later on. No problemo I couldnt use her and not credit you :D Haha i totally forgot we were gonna do that. Thanks for the review!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/03/12 - 05:59 pm · For: Chapters 156-161
Yeah! Go Kuzake and Shezji! You both rock. I don't know why, but I love those two kids.
I'm glad that everyone is finally happy. I loved your battles. I really liked the combined jutsus of Shezji and Kuzake. Overall it was just awesome!
Author's Response: Hehe glad you liked it. I wanted to make them two the favorite characters :D
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/03/12 - 08:03 pm · For: Chapters 186-192
:3 Nitachi and Sasaui are so cute XD
Ino has been avenged, which is a great thing. I am glad that it all went well. It seems like everything is looking up now :D
Awesome update! I think your fights just get more and more epic, especially in terms of description. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Yup everything is good for now! End of that arc lol. Haha thanks! I love battle scenes. I wanna make em as awesome as possible. Thank you for the review!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 24/03/12 - 05:39 pm · For: Chapters 151-155
No, no, no. Don't you ever kill off Shezji or Kuzake (even if you didn't this time, but you got close). I will hunt you down and have Sasaui attack you. Those two awesome youngsters don't deserve to die.
Anyway, I loved this chapter. I really liked the Waterfall of Truth part. You showed that even Shizake has anger deep within himself. I can't wait to see what it leads up to!
Author's Response: Lol I wasnt planning on killing them :P I had to make em lose a fight sooner or later. Thanks for the review! I liked that waterfall of truth part too...I wanted to show that everyone has a dark place inside them but as long as you can overcome it, you cant lose :D
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 22/03/12 - 07:44 pm · For: Chapters 181-185
So that's what you're doing, eh? You're devious, Shizake-san ;) It is still rather cute though. It was really sad to see Nitachi so heartbroken, rhough it is onviously understandable. I hope that relationship blossoms nicely. Keep up the good work on this!
Author's Response: Haha didn't wanna keep any secrets :P I feel a bit mean for doing it though...but at least there is some reason as to why it happened...thanks for the review :)
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 21/03/12 - 01:26 pm · For: Chapters 146-150
I absolutely love this story! I can't wait to see what's going to happen. Well, I have the ability to, but that's not the point. The point is that the iPod is not here and I don't sitting for long, so yeah. That's my point.
Ooh! He's going to go train his dragon spirit. That's so awesome and I'm so excited. And my two favorite characters are going off on a fight? I can't wait to read about it!
Author's Response: haha Thanks! I thought I would get right to the point of him controlling the spirit. But there is a twist with it that isnt exactly how Naruto experienced it, so I hope you like that part. Kuzake and Shezji? Yeah! I really like what their dealing with. It actually is a favorite mission of mine that I wrote :D