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Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 07/10/11 - 03:59 am · For: Chapter 01
Hehe, I like Kouhei. He's funny XD

Hmm, yeah, anyway, Hanae seems really sweet, and I look forward to seeing how you develop her throughout the story. Her family seems really nice so far as well, Daisuke is a really kind brother.

Since this seems to be SasuXOC fic, I only ask that you make sure to stay away from OOCness and be careful on how you write Sasuke. He was good so far, but once he and Hanae start getting to know each other, just be careful. He's a hard character to write.

But anyways, this was really good so far, and I think this could get pretty interesting. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: haha, i love kouhei too. :) thats what im most afraid of. he's such a dynamic character that hes just so diffucult to write. but its a good challenge :) thank you so much for the sweet review!


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