Reviews For Chronicles of My Shinobi's Way
Name: Akatosh23 (Signed) · Date: 08/11/15 - 02:37 am · For: Meeting My Tenant
This is awesome, I'm looking forward to seeing the look on everybody's faces when they see him.
Name: Oni Nexus (Signed) · Date: 07/07/12 - 07:04 am · For: The Judgement Day
this is a good story. I like your humor!
Name: Mikagami39 (Signed) · Date: 16/05/12 - 12:08 am · For: The Judgement Day
This is an awesome story! I fully enjoyed the changes you made to make this a AU. I was impressed by the characterizations and the way they all fit perfectly. Five stars!
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 15/05/12 - 11:50 pm · For: The Triangular Alliance
woohoo...!! u finally updated...!! =D ws wondering if u egave up on this story... D:
and i got 2 kool extra large chappies to read... xD
anyways... wow... he actually was cold to Sakura... O__O hopefully he forgives her... though he now has the ice queens woot...!! and hopefully even mei terumi ;)
but woah at the quality of your writing... =D
and i can't wait to see the shocked looks on everybody's faces... xD
LOOOOL...!! at gai's entrance... xD
awesome...epic update...!!
m off to the next chapter... ^.^
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 04/10/11 - 09:25 pm · For: Abilities, Training & Feelings
lol.....
Tht ws kool....
The secrets of the rinnegan finally revealed....!!!
Eh.... Thir time itachi was OOC.....*sweatdrop*
icha-icha...?? X_X
TROLOL....!!!
Ice mistresses.... I likd tht xDD
lol u made thm look even much hotter than they already are...
I heard of yugao 4 da first time.....
Woah....
All the natures...??!
Thts freaking awesome...!!
Bt naruto might bcome a mary-sue...... xP
well..... Anyways this is starting 2 take a whole new turn....
BUT I LIKE IT....!! xDDD
cnt wait til wen naruto gets out of the mangekyou.....
N woah... U already written the nxt few chapters...? :D
so al u hv 2 do is type.... :P
there were a few mistakes here n there.....
Bt proofreading wil solve tht....
Keep up the awesome job..!!
Name: Tragedy (Signed) · Date: 04/10/11 - 02:59 pm · For: The Judgement Day
Ehh, Dont Confuse His Motif And True Allegiance For His Personality. But Let Me Read This New Chapter, Eh?
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 04/10/11 - 12:05 am · For: The Judgement Day
well... Tragedy is right bout negative reviews... but yh..
thats Itachi's real personality right.. the one he shows later on in the manga..
so i think... i means in my opinion itachi was very well in character...
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 03/10/11 - 11:54 pm · For: Awaken-Transmigeration Eye!
well....
if the last chapter was epic....
i am out of words for this chapter.....
Literally.. m dumb-founded man.... :D
Hw many days of study did u do for this chapter....? :P
I felt as if i was reading one of Kishimoto's manga itself... with all of the info n details u added....Man u are one of the BEST authors i've seen (read) wateva... if not THE best...!!
now for the chapter... oh..man.. that seems a damn lot of pain... :O
termination of old muscles and stuff.. n replacing em...
lol... the mask... n the real naruto thing... makes me feel relieved to think that Naruto isn't just a dumb ass... xD though he actually is in the manga.... =_=" but -sigh-
anyways... woah... Muscles like bushy brow...? nah i think they might a whole lot better.... hehe..
n man... i wish i could see hw naruto looks now... with all de muscles n hair n kool looks..... n BRAINS...!! i Hope he wears a decent costume now too... xP
TROLOL.... Kisame at Itachi shouting... xDDDDD
that was funny.... :PP
as i said... u might hav needed a heck lot of study to get all that info Itachi shared....o-so-generously with Naruto...
u got Itachi in character man... he was kool... Kisame too... xP
haha... poor Orochimaru... xD
n WOAH...!! Kushina Sensei...??? seriously??
is it from the manga...? or did u make it?? in anyways... it was an Awesome idea..!!!
n the Kakashi copying Zabuza's water dragon jutsu... than the weaknesses of the dojutsus... n everything was kool man... it was legendary...!!
n woah... 2 months of training with Itachi..!!!
Naruto will come out as strong as he cn be... O_O
well... man.. i really cant wait for the next update already..!!
Author's Response: Hehe...I'm really ecstatic that you're liking this fic so much! And just wait for ch 3 if you liked this one....cause in my opinion it's even better than this.rnKushina being sensei of Itachi, it will be explained later but I've taken it myself instead of manga :)rnI've already written many chapters ahead of this, and I can assure you that you're in for onre heck of a ride. Just don't take your eyes off the birdie!!! ^_^rnCh 3 is up though if you want read it....
Name: Tragedy (Signed) · Date: 03/10/11 - 08:20 pm · For: The Judgement Day
Again I'm Sorry, I Think People Here Would Rather Give No Review Than Negative Insight. That Sucks In My Opinion Because Most People Who Write On Here Care About They're Skills. Hope You Saw My Criticism More As Helpful Than As Flaming.
Author's Response: Your criticism was definitely helpful.... :)
Name: Tragedy (Signed) · Date: 03/10/11 - 08:17 pm · For: The Judgement Day
Chapter 1 Was Amazing. Chapter 2 Seemed Too Bunched Up To Me. I Don't Have A Problem With Long Chapters As Long As They're Done Right. IDK. Itachi Was Waaaay To AU For The Story In My Opinion He Bordered Between Comic Relief And Failure. It'd Be Wayy Better If You Kept Him Closer To His Original Personality, If Only Because Everyone Else Is Closer To Theirs. Even Sasuke Yelling At Sakura Is More... "Realistic." Get Me? And SOrry, No Offense (Really Hope You're Not Offended Or Anything) It's Just My Take On It. The Story Is STill AN Overall Good Story With A Concept I Don't Think I've Seen Before, SO It's Not Really Cliche. I Like It, And Am Waiting On The Next Chapter.
Author's Response: Well....no I'm not offended and what kind of author can I hope to be if can't even digest one constructive criticism? rnBTW, Itachi is not really AU (aside from comic relief) as per the later parts of the manga. And please don't say for doing the right things, you are the reader and I really appreciate that you're telling me your current views of this fic. But yeah, I hope you'll like the third one. Thanks for reading and reviewing....I really appreciate your effort in clicking that review button (we know how lazy we can be lol) ^_^
Name: SabakuNoAkane (Signed) · Date: 03/10/11 - 08:10 pm · For: Awaken-Transmigeration Eye!
I like this (: It has good depth in the story line - however, I have a question, when Itachi is "speaking" to Kushina, is he saying Kakashi failed? Or that he failed kakashi? I think the first, but I just wanted to make sure. Yeah I like this story (: lol
Author's Response: Glad that you're liking it so far. And yes, the first one actually....Itachi means that Kakashi has failed her son. Keep reading and many a thanks for the review! ^_^
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 30/09/11 - 08:15 am · For: The Judgement Day
O_O
:O
Epic... legendary... a once in a life time experience... unbelievable...amazing...magnificent... n he list goes on n on....!!
OMG...!! I LOVED IT... EVERY PART OF IT...
especially the ending... wen kisame saved Naruto...
n wth...?
lol... u've given naruto tht one thing which kishimoto-san didn't...(brains)
n u made him a Total kickass...
a mask...?
wat? is naruto akatsuki? o_O
suspense... mystery... n wt nt...
i love hw this is goin...
UPDATE SOON....!!
Author's Response: Hehe, glad that you liked it pal! Will be updating soon! ^_^