Wow, interesting. A multi-crossover story? Well, you certainly brought everyone together in a really captivating way.

I like how you set up the scene in the beginning. Describing his life first transitioned really well into him leaving from his meeting.

Naruto being hit with a tranquilizer and then suddenly falling into another world was written really well. And then the fight between the other two, well, that was pretty intense. Naruto's peace-keeping skills really came in handy when he broke up the fight, and his leadership qualities really showed in the end.

I look forward to reading more. I am interested to see where you take this. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks. It seems like you always have a positive form of criticism. Makes me feel good about my work. ^_^rnrnHonestly though, i thought of this probably an hour before i went to sleep, then went to work. Hopefully it progresses well i guess.