Reviews For Just Fall
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 13/01/13 - 05:19 pm · For: Carry You Away
:D It's done! And there's a happy ending! I'm so happy for them, they get to be together! I loved reading the original and this sequel, both were such great stories. I loved following this story until the end, thank you very much for finishing it up so well. Great work and I hope to see more future projects from you :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D <3
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 12/12/12 - 05:34 pm · For: The Hardest Part
Oh my gosh, poor Haketa... I think a lot of people can relate to the depression she's going through, and I think you described the way she's hurting herself really well.
And... WHAT~ Kankurou is coming?! "it's ready for me to grab..." O_o What on earth does that mean...
This is the second to last chapter?! Oh my gosh, the next chapter is the last one... I don't know if I should be excited or terrified to see how this goes :x Looking forward to more though! Nice job!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 11/12/12 - 08:48 pm · For: Go Home
What~ No! Haketa can't leave Suna! Kankurou is there, and her friends and the restaurant. She can't leave T_T I was so upset with Kankurou for being such a jerk to her, but at least he apologized I guess... though I can still understand why she'd be angry with him.
Gah, I wanna know what happens because I don't want her to go back to Konoha T_T Update soon please! Keep up the awesome work with this story!
Author's Response: Thank you for continuing to read my story! :3 It really means a lot to me. And I'm working on the next chapter right now!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/11/12 - 10:37 pm · For: Torture
My god, Serisu is such a psycho O_o Poor Haketa...
Her dad owes these horrible people money? What~ That's insane...
I'm so glad she was set free and the siblings found her. I hope she's alright though.
Nice update Rezzalia-san. Keep up the good work!
Name: purpledinosaur (Signed) · Date: 21/11/12 - 09:10 am · For: Torture
Worse? Did they kidnap Kyan too? Also, WHY THE HELL DID IT TAKE THEM SO LONG!!!!!!!!!!!! HAKETA COULD HAVE DIED!!!!!!! It was a good chapter, though. I liked it a lot. Can't wait till the next one!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/11/12 - 12:35 pm · For: Solitude
o_O Who the heck is this guy?! His appearance surprised the heck out of me, I wasn't expecting her to be attacked by a man. Serisu maybe but some other person? I wonder who he is... And Kankurou, Temari, and Gaara better get there ASAP!
Nice update, Rezzalia-san! Keep up the awesome work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 07/08/12 - 09:56 am · For: Experience
"We’ll be connected at the hip and you won’t even be able to shower without me there.”
Oh yeah, I'm really sure both of them would love that XD
OMGOSH, there's the L word! It's been said! That's so exciting! So amazingly adorable! I love it~!
Hearing that that lunatic Serisu escaped is kinda scary, Kankurou better keep his promise to protect her. Of course, it's just even cuter that he wants to be there for her ^_^
Great job on this chapter, Rezzalia-san! I'm loving this story more and more! Keep up the good work!
Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 02/08/12 - 11:03 pm · For: Experience
Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 15/06/12 - 05:06 pm · For: Poison
Oh no! someone tried to kill her
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 14/06/12 - 07:24 pm · For: Poison
O_O Kyan is poisoned?! That's terrible! Oh my gosh, she needs to be alright soon! T_T This is so sad... I hope everything works out and they find the person who did this to poor Kyan.
Name: JubileeOfPuppies (Signed) · Date: 14/06/12 - 04:28 pm · For: Poison
Oh my god... I never guess poison, I actually thought of something I find worse -_- That bit where she hacked up blood reminded me of my sister, who has a bad ulcer, which is hardly a problem now, thank God.
This was an amazing chapter that I really couldn't look away from. I hope Kyan is okay, but I'm very angry with whoever was trying to kill Temari and got the poor little one instead >:(
Name: JubileeOfPuppies (Signed) · Date: 14/06/12 - 04:20 pm · For: Grand Opening
This chapter was so packed full of stuff I'm not sure where to begin (I mean this in a good way)!
Ryuinn is probably my favorite employee; he just seems like a great guy :3 I worry about that dish washing girl, though, as she seems like someone who will unintentionally cause a massive problem -_-
Kyan? Kyan, Kyan, Kyan! What's wrong! What happened?! No! I can't stand the suspense of not knowing, I must go to the next chapter (there's going to be another cliffhanger, isn't there?)!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 25/05/12 - 11:53 am · For: Grand Opening
Ah, congratulations on almost graduating!
And anyway, this chapter was really interesting. I'm glad the first day of the new restaurant went well.
What the heck, why did Kankurou barge into her bathroom? O_O
Oh my gosh, is something wrong with Kyan? She was just coming out of her shell, is something wrong again? Poor girl...
Awesome chapter, Rezzalia! Keep up the good work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 09/04/12 - 09:17 am · For: No Words
It's about time, dang nab it! Yes! They're finally together! Sorta.... But I'm still counting that! Great chapter, it was so romantically mushy, I loved it! Keep up the good work!
Name: JubileeOfPuppies (Signed) · Date: 09/04/12 - 07:50 am · For: No Words
There, I was less lazy in getting around to this chapter! Score one for myself in vanquishing laziness!
On to your story then. I think it's definitely interesting that Kyan is so fascinated by Suna politics. Gaara is the kazekage after all ;3
The plot has realy settled in. You're at the amazing point in the story where it could either end soon, or continue for another ten plus chapters! I think you can guess which one I'm hoping for :3 (I don't wanna see it end!)
Anyhow, I love how you have so many subplots spinning around in here. You've got Haketa and Kankuro, which I consider the main plot. You've got Kyan and the new shop. You seem nto have put hiring people into its own plot too!
This is becoming a lengthy review, so I'll call it quits. Update soon please!
Name: JubileeOfPuppies (Signed) · Date: 07/04/12 - 01:13 pm · For: Homesick
Oh, how sad. The piece in your chapter notes sounds frustrating. I don't have any sort of relationships outside of my family, so I'm more than a newbie when it comes to romance.
I'll say it again, I love how even when nothing super important happens, your story is still massively interesting. I really want Haketa's life to get simple because I feel so bad for her!
I really liked the ending, with the pretty girl and how you explained that Kakuro wasn't interested. That was really refreshing. All in all I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter :3
Name: JubileeOfPuppies (Signed) · Date: 07/04/12 - 01:03 pm · For: Bracelets
I kept waiting for this to update, and when it did, I didn't read it! Please forgive me!
ANyhow, this was a great piece. I really love the way you write the Naruto cast, and Haketa's emotions are always so realistic. The bracelet bit was really sweet. Somehow, a child can make anything a work of art.
An overall great read Rezzy, I'll get to the next chapter as soon as I can!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 05/04/12 - 03:54 pm · For: Homesick
Awww! It still is very cute, even if you think your writing for cutesy romantic stuff is a little deflated. This was still perfect.
Oh, and I hope everything works out for you in your own love life. I had that problem as well, so I can relate. I definitely hope it works out better for you than it did for me ;)
Anyway, keep up the awesome work with this story!
Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 05/04/12 - 10:15 am · For: Homesick
awwwww i'm sorry about your sticky love life. things will look up soon, so don't worry :)
Name: DestinyGirl (Signed) · Date: 31/03/12 - 08:23 am · For: The Happy Couple
Haha, the ending to that was just hilarious!:P I absolutely love where this is going, and I can't wait to read more - you have me hooked!XD
Name: DestinyGirl (Signed) · Date: 31/03/12 - 07:58 am · For: Oh, Hell
Oh wow, this is a great opening chapter for your sequel!!!:D I can't believe Kankaro! How dare he! I'm definitely on Haketa's side all the way! I really like Kyan's development, I'm so excited for whenever she meets with Gaara!XD So awesome! I can't stop reading this.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 31/03/12 - 05:28 am · For: Bracelets
Aww, poor Haketa! That's so sad how she had a little breakdown. That has to be so frightening for her. I hope she'll eventually get better. And wow, I'm surprised Kankurou bought the bracelet for himself. I thought he was going to get it for her :P
Well anyway, awesome update! I loved it! Keep up the amazing work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 31/01/12 - 02:24 pm · For: Comic Relief
Aww, Haketa and Kankuro getting all cuddly at night, it's so adorable :3 And Kasaji definitely is a comic-relief kind of character. I kind of enjoyed his presence, even if he did make Haketa feel all awkward and everything XD Anyway, nice chapter, Rezzalia-san! I can't wait to read more, and I hope you get over your illness soon. Keep up the amazing work!
Name: JubileeOfPuppies (Signed) · Date: 31/01/12 - 01:57 pm · For: Comic Relief
Frances McDormand, you are a genius. Ah, Rezzy. DOn't you just love the bi polar weather in the desert? One minute you're dying of a heat stroke, the next you've got yourself some hypothermia. Lovely. Anyhow, I liked this. And Kasiji seemed like a fun character, I also sense that he may be a matchmaker. He made the pleasantly lengthed chapter all the more entertaining. I love how even though there's very little dramatic development in this chapter, it's still somehow worth waiting any length of time for. You're a skilled writer, Rezzy, and I hope to see more soon!
Name: JubileeOfPuppies (Signed) · Date: 22/01/12 - 10:12 am · For: A New Home
Congrats on the job! This was a great installment, I don't mind the wait. I recently forced my readers to wait forever too XD Ah, Serisu is so lucky that this is after the Chunin exams. If it weren't, she would be so dead right now. ANyhow, i loved this and I hope to see more soon! One more thiung, I've never read about people harassing Kankuro to become Kazekage, I think that was a creative and logical twist. Wow, this review is very scatter brained... Can I call you Rezzy?
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm already about half-way through the next chapter, so that should be up soon. And of course you can call me Rezzy! xD I play an online Naruto-based RPG with the name Rezzalia, and everyone there calls me Rezzy. So it works out! :3
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