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Reviews For Despised

Name: Diane (Signed) · Date: 24/10/14 - 08:29 pm · For: Epilogue: 13 Years Later
I love this story! Great job. =)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 08/06/11 - 03:41 am · For: Epilogue: 13 Years Later
*tear* It's over.... It's so saddening, and yet, it was such a great ending. That really was the best way to end this story. Everyone is happy and together, and Megumi came back. How awesomely sweet. Such a good ending.

You did an amazing job with this entire story. It was great throughout the entire thing. Well done with everything you have given to this story. Keep up the great work with your writing, I look forward to seeing what else you write.

Author's Response: thanx 4 following this story to the very end. there will be more storiez 2 come, just have to get them uploaded. LOL.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 07/06/11 - 07:24 am · For: Chapter 50: Awakening Part 2
Amazing! By far, the most wonderful chapter of this story! The two are reunited, and it is just beautiful. The only sad thing is that Megumi and Shukaku are gone. But he proposed to her! And he's going to be a daddy! What a wonderful way to end the chapter. And what the heck, that's so sudden! Only one chapter left?! Oh no! Aw....

Author's Response: if i didnt end it now...it would just go into rambling mode...and no one wants that. LOL. But i promise the final chapter will b amazingly worth it. :) and there will b a new one out soon. :)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 07/06/11 - 03:44 am · For: Chapter 49: Awakening Part 1
Well, glad to hear you're sticking to the traditional plotline, now I don't have to wait in suspense to see what is happening next ;D But this was terribly sad nonetheless. The entire thing with Salacia only adds more depth to Gaara's death. Nice work with this story so far. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: i will. :) there is plenty more to come.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 06/06/11 - 01:39 pm · For: Chapter 48: Truth in Dreams
Loved it! Brilliant! I'm so glad you wrote this! It explained so much in such a beautiful manner! Well done, great work!

Author's Response: thanx. i felt getting in depth with Megumi would b a good idea. lol.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 04/06/11 - 06:49 pm · For: Chapter 47: Escape
Heck yeah! Gaara's alive! Naruto is awesome, I love it! Amazing, truly great! What was I thinking, you would never kill off Gaara, that'd be cruel and vicious of you. Keep up the great work, this is so good!

Author's Response: remember...thatz her dream...i just hope it comez true. ;)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 04/06/11 - 02:24 pm · For: Chapter 46: Alone
She's alone?! Megumi is dead?! Oh my goodness, Gaara died! Oh no, I can't believe this happened?! Please update soon, there's gotta be something that makes this better, just something! Please post the next chapter so I can find out what happens next!

Author's Response: i never said Gaara was 'dead' he's still just gone...there will b more...promise...:)


Name: xXemoxxbabeXx (Anonymous) · Date: 03/06/11 - 07:33 pm · For: Character Info
I love this one too please pleas please update!!!

Author's Response: i will. :)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 02/06/11 - 04:06 am · For: Chapter 45: Rescue Plans
AWWWW!!! I love Naruto, he is so awesome! And that's so cute about their brotherly/sisterly relationship! Great chapter, it was so sweet. Can't wait for some more! At least things are looking up....slightly.

Author's Response: yeah, they love each other like family and would do anything 4 each other. things r looking up...but will they stay that was? lol :)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/06/11 - 04:36 pm · For: Chapter 44: News
The Akatsuki?! Nooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't believe he's been captured! He just couldn't be, oh no!!!!!

Well, now I hope you are now obligated to post an even faster chapter soon *stern voice fails miserably*

Bah, alright. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I'M GOING TO DIE.... or rather.... GAARA'S GOING TO DIE!!!!

Author's Response: i'm following the story best i can. itz very sad, but c'est la vie (such is life)rnthere will b an update soon. PROMISE!


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/06/11 - 03:29 am · For: Chapter 43: Suspicions Confirmed
Told ya I knew what it was ;)

Author's Response: i'm sure u did, didn't doubt u 4 a minute. lol. :) what is she going 2 do now is the big question. lol.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 31/05/11 - 03:34 am · For: Chapter 42: Sickness
Wow, this chapter was so emotionally distressing. Gaara leaving was so painful for Sal, obviously. And then.... then I figured out what it was! YAY! I'm not gonna say anything because I'll spoil it for the other readers. But yeah, I know what it is! Now I only need for you to confirm my suspicions ;)

Author's Response: i'm sure you have, there were hintz and i know u must have caught them. ;) i will update soon. :)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 30/05/11 - 06:30 pm · For: Chapter 41: Dinner and News
Who is it?! Oh no, Kankurou! If this is how the story is changing, I like it so far. Totally definitely can't wait for more now! Update soon, please, I'm all in suspense now, this is getting dramatic!

Author's Response: i love drama...as long as i'm not stuck n the middle. lol. rni will b updating very soon. :)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 30/05/11 - 08:41 am · For: Chapter 40: Plans
Ooh, a special dinner? What will happen, I cannot wait to see.

And it is so cute that Naruto replied. But what is up with the shinobi dying? Crazy....

Can't wait for more, I hope you update more soon!

Author's Response: i will and some great thingz r 2 come. rnjust a warning the story will change up just a little bit 2 work along with salaciaz character. lol.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 29/05/11 - 06:22 pm · For: Chapter 39: Letters Written
Aw, writing letters, that is so sweet. Can't wait to see what Naruto has to say about his life. It's cool to keep things in check with the Leaf ninja and see where the timeline is. Nice detail for their relationship. Love it!

Author's Response: i think a handwritten letter can mean more than an email or text anyday. :) guess i'm just old fashioned that way. lol. :)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/05/11 - 06:39 pm · For: Chapter 38: Surprises
Haha, you like those promise rings, don't you? ;) I liked that ending, it was so cute.

Author's Response: yep. lol. i hope 2 recieve 1 someday. lol. Yeah...i liked the cuteness at the ending. :) glad u did 2.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 26/05/11 - 07:54 pm · For: Chapter 37: Shopping
Wow, I loved this chapter! Shopping, every girl's dream ;) And oh man, Gaara will be so shocked, can't wait to see his expression. Yup, good job with this. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: i only like shopping sometiemz. lol. there will b more. lol


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 26/05/11 - 03:42 am · For: Chapter 36: Observations
Ooh, what is Gaara's surprise? I must find out! And what is Temari thinking?! Well, I don't know if Sal and Gaara would make good parents, they had such sucky childhoods. But, maybe things will be the opposite for their kids. I don't know, I'll just have to read to find out! Good job with this, there were huge plot developments in this chapter. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: yeah, maybe she wants them to make the perfect family...like the kind they never had. :)rni'm so going 2 keep writing, one of the best things about writing is when people enjoy reading it.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 25/05/11 - 04:11 pm · For: Chapter 35: The Truth
Dang... the truth is finally revealed. And Gaara still loves her, how sweet! Those two are really blossoming into such an adorable couple. I love where this story is headed, I really do. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: i will, i am so glad that you r liking this. i have some huge plans 4 this story. :) you will soon see. :)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 23/05/11 - 03:40 am · For: Chapter 34: Saved
Seriously?! Really?! You are so mean with the cliffhangers, darn it! Megumi's her mother, how can you leave something like that hanging?! Oh gosh, I really need an update, please please PLEASE!

Author's Response: clifhangers...keep people reading...author traning 101...lol. :) glad you're liking it. will update asap. :)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 18/05/11 - 01:58 pm · For: Chapter 33
Oh, a couple plot developments. Sasuke has left, and things will be intense on Gaara's end. And as for Salacia, I hope she finds out about Megumi's secret. Or should I say, I hope I find out about Megumi's secret! That is such character insight that I just have to know what it is. Please update soon so I can find out what happened! Keep up the amazing work with your stories, very nice job!

Author's Response: the update will be soon. i have BIG plans for this secret of Megumi's, but please be patient with me. LOL. i like the suspense. LOL. MUHAHAHAHA! LOL. You will never know! HAHAHAHA! LOL. JK. I'm hyper. LOL.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 16/05/11 - 03:44 am · For: Chapter 32: The Talk
Oh gosh. Poor Temari escaped a terrible conversation. But oh, poor poor Kankuro. I wonder how that went. Terribly terribly awkward, I can only assume. Good job on this. I can't wait to find out more about Salacia's new life in the Sand Village. We shall see, so please update soon and keep up the great work!

Author's Response: the updates will be out soon. promise. :)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 13/05/11 - 07:29 pm · For: Chapter 31: Back to the Moon
Oh wow, what a farewell 'Goodbye and good riddance.' But it is nice to see that she is finally free of that horrible place. Good for her. Now what is going to happen next?! Update soon so I can find out, please!

Author's Response: well that was how she felt.rni have to admit...i said that when i graduated highschool...Goodbye JVHS and Good Riddance to Cluques! HAHAHA! LOL.rnI have HUGE planz 4 this story, and i am typing like CRAZY to be able to post my update. :) LOL.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 13/05/11 - 03:44 am · For: Chapter 30: Questions Part 2-Girl Talk
Oo, there ain't no other way, Baby I was born this way. Baby I was born this way!!!!

*Ahem* Sorry... Whenever I hear mention of that song, I start singing it. It's a great song, I can't help it.

That interrogation went a lot better than I thought it was going to be. I thought Temari was going to chew Salacia out and then spit her back out. But it is nice to see all the girls getting along with one another. Nice change of pace.

Great job with this. What happens next? I need to know! So update soon please, I love your stories!

Author's Response: i will. been so busy with final exams.rnbut they r over now so i can focus wholly on my fanfic. LOL.rnthanx 4 loving my work. i am in the midst of another story that I have been working on. it is almost at the stage to wher i am confident in posting it. :)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 09/05/11 - 02:04 pm · For: Chapter 29: Questions Part 1
Wow, I was expecting Kankuro to be super skeptical, but it was nice to see him actually getting along with Sal. New change of perspective for her and for the readers to see someone so chill with her around. Well, not chill so much as he is getting comfortable, whichi is quite the breakthrough for him. Good job with this, and I so cannot wait to see how Temari is going to be with her own interrogation. Keep up the great writing!

Author's Response: I will...and i like Kankuro...i can't make him be too bad. LOL. :)rnAnd i will keep writing, i love it and I'm glad you are enjoying it. :)


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