I started reading this a long time ago, and it is still good. When is the next chapter coming out?
I REALLY love this storu. NEDDS UPDATES!
oh don't stop nowwwwwwwww!
this is just beautiful. you constructed the relationship perfectly, and the insight into the minds of two such diverse people was brilliant
wow wow wow. that was an amazing story. this is the first time i've given a review. but i love it soo much. ^_^
oooo i like the first chapter...verry profesional =^.^= xx
Next chappi plz ^^b29;
I'm glad you liked it! And of course they make a phenomenal couple.
Yo, just came across this story and realised I hadn't read it. I'm glad I have now- I really liked it. It was really sweet, and much as Kiba protested it in 'We Apologize to the Fans', they do make such a fantastic couple. ^_^
Now if that isn't just an Aww...moment there! I can't tell which I like better! Your beautifully dark drabbles that make me want to weep or your cute and fluffy drabbles that make me want to say aww and giggle. Either way I love them both! Wonderful! Simply wonderful! With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
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-- Archaic Aphorism :Dear god, you are an author's best friend... I think I'm madly in love with you.
I mean... I usually expect to wait two or three days before there's any activity at all in my stories and I check back just... what... mabye half-an-hour later? And then, poof! A Vampires Butterfly has read and dropped me a line. I love reading your reviews... it makes me want to open my Microsoft Word and start writing another story, even if I only just finished the last one.
Thankyou so much! I'm glad you like, and I promise to keep working hard to produce stories worthy of your praise.
Oh, my gods. That was so sad. So tragic. Got me a tear in my eye. As usual, beautifully written. You capture things so well!
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-- Archaic Aphorism : Thankyou! Sorry I didn't send it through you to get BETA'ed, but like I said before... waiting for the other stuff to come back. When're you updating The Fox and The Hound? (I haven't checked in a while, so maybe you have.)
it was sad ='[ , very good
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-- Archaic Aphorism : Thankyou, I hope you liked it even though it was sad
*takes a deep breath* Okay...that was just...God damn it I need some better words to help me describe your freaking stories! I have no idea how to compliment you on this or how to point out how it was just beautiful and a masterpiece and how most, no all, of your works are like this. This depressing and dark at its best and I'm glad to see this couple being used more, even more so being written by such a great author. This just makes me want to stop them before it happens, and makes me sad when I can't. Once again I wish I had better words to describe this. With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
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-- Archaic Aphorism : I'm... utterly speachless at the moment now, too. I can't believe there's somebody who likes me stories this much! [is all warm and fuzzy] Thankyou so much! Geezus, thank god there are people who like dark!fics. People like you keep me writing, thankyou so much (I think I already said that, but too bad).
Poor team Gai. That was a funny story though!! It made you want to laugh and cry! With much love, care, and furballs, Uchiha Kitten! =^-^=
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-- Archaic Aphorism : I know, everyone always complains that I constantly kill members of Team Gai in random not-so-nice ways... but that's only because I love them so much! (man, that's some screwed up love, huh?). Anyhow, glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing.
Oh my gods, I love it. Keep going!
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-- Archaic Aphorism : I definitely will keep going! I'm glad you like it -^.^-
I love this story. Kiba and Shino growing old together, how cute! I feel sorry for team Gai though!
Author's Response: I know! I had a friend once ask me (and I quote) "Why the hell do you always fuck with team Gai? Give them a happy ending for once!" 'cuz... I didn't realize it before, but I always write bad things happening to members of Team Gai. T.T I don't know why I do it, because I actually really respect Lee, and Tenten is amazing if she keeps her hands offa my Neji (obviously, I'm in love with Neji so let's not go there). I guess they're just so screwed up to begin with it's easy to screw them up just a bit more >.< as horrible as that is.
Oh damn that's sad, it makes you want to giggle and cry at the same time. Wonderful job! So sorry to hear you deleted this. I'm adding it to my favorites now! Glad to hear Shino and Kiba finally get some time to shine! With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
Author's Response: hee hee, thankyou! I'm glad you liked it.
Just read this and 'I Saw God Cry', loved them both. You capture emotions very nicely, and the endings of these two stories are so moving it's incredible. Kiba's desire to get to know Shino before it's too late, I thinks it breathtakingly beautiful because to me Shino is so...misunderstood somehow. And you nearly had me crying by the end of 'I Saw God Cry', finally someone realised Shino is merely a boy after all. Beautiful work.
Author's Response: Wow! Thankyou! It's always surprised me how much people have liked these two stories... because... I actually really didn't like I Saw God Cry when I wrote it (still kinda don't >.O )
Wonderfully written as always :) I was totally absorbed in it. You gotta update soon, I need to know what happens to Kiba! I didn't spot any mistakes after reading it through twice. It all flowed rather nicely :D
Author's Response: Hee hee, thanks X3 I'm glad you liked the new chapter. And sorry I haven't been sending you things to BETA before I post them... T.T It's just... I write at like two in the morning... and... I'm impatient XD I dunno, I like posting at two in the morning... next thing will go through you first before getting posted, I swear -.-'
Someones killing horses to make wigs?
Author's Response: This says you commented on chapter one... did you seriously figure that out just from the first chapter? (that's darned perceptive! I better go out and buy you some cookies, geez)
This made me want to cry! So well written, and so sad. I love these three, and aww. It's made me emotional lol. Good job.
Author's Response: Thankies X3 I'm so glad you liked it. To be honest, I wasn't expecting anyone to like it... but it seems that people always really like the oneshots that I tend to dislike... huh. Maybe I should write more stuff that I -don't- like and post it, neh? XD just kidding.
I think HinataXKiba is the best couple. I'm not homophobic or anything but Kiba belongs to Hinata as far as I know...
Author's Response: I don't think anyone could belong to Hinata... but I think she should be with Naruto [waves Naruto x Hinata flag] And as one of my favorite Shino x Kiba authors once said to me when I paired Kiba with someone other than Shino, "Kiba... Shino's... hand burning."
That made me cry...
I'm serious
If col meant "cry out loud" than
col col col col col col
But it was still a good story
Author's Response: Thankyou ^.^' I'm glad you found it so moving.
Hmm this is intriguing...the horses...the opium..Shino's buggies...something's going to happen and I can't wait to see it
Author's Response: Oooh, someone picked up a lot faster than I could have hoped for! Cookies for you.
Cha! love this! Those two are just so good together! Good ending too, i really like it!